Tuesday, 12 October 2010

1 comment:

  1. Good start Sharaya, your personality comes across well on the video and you have a fun upbeat energy. However to improve your video further you need to do a main piece to camera and then use the footage which you have shot as cutaways to illustrate the points you have made. At the moment the video is way to long, it only needs to be 2mins so you need to carefully select the best bits and get rid of the rest! Let me know if you need further assistance.

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